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| southgathering | Patrol: Hunting | StreamClan Territory and Boundaries | 3 | Jun 24 2008, 4:40 PM EDT by FlameoftheWest | |||
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Thread started: Jun 17 2008, 7:39 AM EDT
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Saffronstar looks around. Nightshine and her deputy are just sitting around. She summons them, and tells them she wants them on a hunting patrol. Just the two of them.
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| dovesong | Camp Enforcement | BreezeClan | 3 | Jun 17 2008, 7:34 AM EDT by southgathering | |||
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Thread started: May 24 2008, 2:44 PM EDT
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*Padding around restlessly, Zephyrstar spies a few patches in the camp that need reinforcement. Yowling a clan meeting, she informs her clanmates that the walls will need to be patched.*
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| southgathering | Request from Wolfpaw | RockClan Members | 2 | Jun 3 2008, 4:49 PM EDT by southgathering | |||
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Thread started: May 30 2008, 2:28 PM EDT
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"Wolfpaw, please go find Creamfur and ask for some mousebile. There is this one tick that is in my neck that I can't get out. And also, please remind Dawnsky that she should send another patrol to make sure that the clan that owns the territory you strayed into don't get TOO riled up," Sorrowheart advises when he spots Wolfpaw wandering around camp restlessly.
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| southgathering | Saffronstorm | Starlight Cavern | 6 | May 30 2008, 2:23 PM EDT by southgathering | |||
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Thread started: Apr 24 2008, 4:06 PM EDT
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∆I place my paws into the water, and lay my paws over the cold rocks, waiting for StarClan to send me dreams. I quickly drift of to sleep, my orange pelt dyeing the icy blue light a feint orange.
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| Moonclaw435 | Untitled | BurnClan | 16 | May 27 2008, 8:46 PM EDT by Moonclaw435 | |||
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Thread started: May 22 2008, 11:46 PM EDT
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*Cat said I could do this...*
Wildkit~ Wildkit yawned and arched her back, slowly walking out of the nursery and into the sunlight. She squinted her eyes at the bright light and continued to walk, a scent catching in the roof of her mouth. She opened her eyes wider, tilting her head upwards and padding towards the entrance of the camp. Whatever it was it sure made her mouth water. She looked around quickly, noticing that nobody was watching and continued out of the camp, searching for whatever was giving off that deluctant smell.
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| dovesong | Hey...can I create another cat? | BurnClan Members | 1 | May 24 2008, 7:04 PM EDT by cat4prowl | |||
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Thread started: May 24 2008, 2:50 PM EDT
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If I can...here's some stuff:
Name: Mintwhisker Gender: female Appearance: pale gray tabby she-cat with faint undertones of a reddish-brown and white. Personality: Mintwhisker is a witty, charming she-cat who enjoys play-fighting. She is generally excited, but is very serious in the face of danger. She is straight-forward and very loyal to her clanmates & friends. Why I Should Be Allow To Have Another Cat: Cuz it'll make the RPing much more interesting Why I Would Be A Great Addition to This Clan: Because I can help support BurnClan and I can fight & hunt for elders, kits and the older (much older) senior warrirs. I have a lot of strengh and I can help them thrive.
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| dovesong | Love It! | Shrouded Sun Chapter 2- Challenge | 2 | May 10 2008, 8:29 PM EDT by dovesong | |||
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Thread started: May 7 2008, 7:55 PM EDT
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I really like it!
All of the character's personalities have already shown through. I was just wondering... Was Sunpaw born with three legs, or was she hit by a monster...or something like that?
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| cat4prowl | cat4prowl's Comment | Chapter 1 & The Prologue | 2 | May 1 2008, 6:53 PM EDT by cat4prowl | |||
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Thread started: Apr 30 2008, 11:15 AM EDT
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This is very interesting, I hope chapter 2 is coming soon! Some things I could offer as constructive criticism are:
1)expand. It's very short and you could add some details in there. I wanna know more! 2)show don't tell. For example, when you say that Ravenstripe was just made warrior you could describe his appearance and the way he is sitting instead, and maybe mention vigil. From his name, we would know that he was just made a warrior. Other than that, it was very good! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope this helped! -cat4prowl
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| dovesong | Comment #1 | Shrouded Sun Prologue- Lightning | 3 | May 1 2008, 6:51 PM EDT by cat4prowl | |||
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Thread started: Apr 29 2008, 6:26 PM EDT
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Can you give us an 'Alliance'...who's in what clan...cuz later, it's gonna get really confusing
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| dovesong | i may do 1 too... | cat4prowl's FanFiction | 1 | Apr 29 2008, 10:17 PM EDT by cat4prowl | |||
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Thread started: Apr 29 2008, 4:00 PM EDT
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is that okay?
i've been writing stuff like this 4 the past...three years. i'm 100% addicted 2 this series.
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| dovesong | Am I Truly the One to Lead my Clan? | StarClan | 3 | Apr 21 2008, 8:42 PM EDT by cat4prowl | |||
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Thread started: Apr 21 2008, 5:23 PM EDT
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You send the dream...but I would really appreciate some confirmation...it didn't quite seem...
real in a sense. Sorry to inturrupt you other urgent matters. Thank you very much, Zephyrcloud
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